Even Though Poem by Silence Dogood

Even Though



No one is worth your tears.
And the one who is wont make you cry.
You dont have to live in fear.
Cuz someday you'll meet that guy.
There will be a happy ending.
Everythings real theres no pretending.
No matter the good or bad.
he will be the best youve had.
And even though im smiling
It doesnt mean its real.
Cuz even though im talking.
My lips are sealed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Lloyd 17 September 2008

Kyla, I read several of your poems. They were dark, yet had a spiritual quality to them. I sense that possibly you have lost someone. Also, your writing reflects the severity of youth. My writing when I was 13,14 years old were of a 'down' nature. The writing was exceptional for someone your age. Get the right education and I believe I will be reading your works. You show great promise as a writer. One other thing. People that love you will make you cry. The difference is, they will ask for forgiveness and, because you love them, you will forgive them. Good luck with your future. Dan Lloyd

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