Evening Eyes Poem by utsav dhital

Evening Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Mountains top
Snows around
Silent and cold
Setting sun
Being warm is the mission

Increasing shadows of the evening
Bunches of bushes burn
Fireflies roaming around
Sky filled with clouds
Sweet, Calm and fulfilling evening
As everyone would have imagined

Instead
Eyes were never quite
Washed by tears
He can never spell the reason
Soul, once he nourished
Was now broken...

-: Festive

Friday, September 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,love,soul
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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 September 2017

Such an interesting poem...: a highest 10+++++

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utsav dhital

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kathmandu, Nepal
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