Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Everlasting True Comments

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The green, salted ocean; vast trail held them apart
The love he knows and feels so close
Hope that she is true to him as he is her
He blows kisses in the air, hoping the wind will let her see the lasting touch of true love
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Jessa Hughes
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Philip Housiaux 28 April 2008

This poem is prepared to be long and break up rhythm and rhyme in order to get out what is an obviously strongly felt story of true values and admiration in suffering. Very strong writing. Keep writing and study prosody.

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