Evil Deeds Poem by johnny clark

Evil Deeds

Rating: 4.9


cant stop
wont stop
tell the day that i drop
iam gunna always be on top
iam a beast
you are my feast
ill come sweep you of your feet
wen iam ready to eat
cuz out here on the streets
its every man for them selfs
soo sell wat you sell
its not going to affect me
but dam i wish
things didnt have to be
the way they are
i dont waant my family or seed
see all the evil deeds
that ive done
i pray to god that
he still exepts his son

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kimberly Wares 05 March 2010

man, very angry, and yet guilty at the end? very interesting, & don't we all hav at least 1 evil deed, i kno i do...

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Tyease Collins 07 February 2009

This poem is completely hardcore and the anger and aggression really sets this poem off well. Good Job 10/10 Tyease

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LOVEFOOL Aka 03 February 2009

Very good write, fast and angry with a real in your face ending10

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