Exceeding The Unreachable Heights Poem by Kobby King

Exceeding The Unreachable Heights

Rating: 4.9


In the face of imminent failure and motivated by absolute nothing I strive

Lonely steps amist a crouded path

Sharing your joy but absent in your pain they be

When no more bottom I can reach

and rising become the optionless choise

Drawing aspirations from the hopes of the downtrodden I rise

Dreaming to fulfil the dreams of others I Strive

As I pray to answer the prayers of others my zeal exceeds it maxim

In desiring to effect change my own pain I forget

Stubbornly dragging along the broken pieces of my inner being

by the even yet fragile outer self

I must pursue the said unreachable

Still motivated by the nothingness of the forgoten

My less than one baby steps I do take

on my way to exceed the unreachable heights

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Luther 14 September 2008

very inspirational...this can only come from the heart of a true warrior!

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Fay Slimm 10 September 2008

This one speaks in a grand manner. There is much to make the reader ponder, and the flow is good. Well done. a Ten.

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Tom Balch 09 September 2008

Great first line, starts the piece with meaning and gives it life regards Tom

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