Monday, July 19, 2010

Excessive Heat Comments

Rating: 4.5

The shade of parched trees provide
modest mercy from the scorching degrees
Waves of heat oppress like a stifling tide...
still wilting blooms continue to invite bees
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Marina Gasbey 19 July 2010

This poem is very descriptive, and visual! I could almost feel the heat! Very good job Theresa Ann Moore! ........ Marina Gasbey

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Theresa Ann Moore

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Michigan, U.S.A.
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