Existence Poem by Patrick Keenan

Existence

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Come all you who earn your burn
Whose lives depend on the favors of man
This damp night air
It don't care
The moon's so full and high
It ain't bothered by our ways
So let us go
our ways
always
a ways away

Saturday, November 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: existence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lili Kochar 05 November 2016

You truly are gifted Patrick. I enjoyed reading your poem! May your imaginations always flow past the darkest clouds and touch the rainbow so all the souls sing along and find hope and love! Peace ~ Lili p.s Thank you for sharing~~~

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Lili Kochar 05 November 2016

Thank you for this Patrick! It is a beautiful piece of poetry and I should say: you are gifted! ! May your imagination always flow with stardust and shine specially extraordinarily in the darkest nights! Peace and love ~ Lili

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