Sunday, April 26, 2009

Eye Of God Comments

Rating: 4.5

Feelings exposed as an open cast mine erupts within the once verdent valley of my soul,
torn asunder by the cancerous claws of a liar.
Black thoughts emenating from a once tranquil mindset,
now content to live out the days in search of the opulent exquisite feeling of revenge.
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Saadat Tahir 26 April 2009

sacrilage some would call it raw and uninhibited...as furious as the gale force wind that blows away the shelter of an old lady or the few morsels from a devastated land beyond comprehension the ways of nature nice lines cheers

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Adrian Wait 26 April 2009

excellent. Honest and vivid

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, aryaindia 26 April 2009

A lot of questions with no real convincing answers...............light in the middle of nowhere..............just go on...........good write..........arya

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