Saturday, October 26, 2019

Eyes Don't Lie, Comments

Rating: 5.0

Following the snap shut sound of your zippo off and on,
believed to be alone.
I find you smoking on the porch overlooking the lawn,
believed to be alone.
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Manon van Slogteren
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 November 2019

Brilliant word choice for this Ghazal. I have enjoyed a very lot. Indeed, Eyes Don't Lie, a very impressive poem. A 10 Full Score and much much more for this amazing Ghazal..

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 October 2019

Words may try but your eyes don't lie, as I reach out my open hand invitingly, overlooking the pain you trying to disguise for the sake of love. very expressive of the feelings.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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