F' My Life I Hate This Place Poem by Coolwater Menstruums Shannon Daron Strauss

F' My Life I Hate This Place



'a place'

...atleast its somewhere, atleast
everywhere but somewhere is where i be

look at you________; do you see me...going nowhere
so what i dont care, and you do because people like you are rare

you've been here and there... seen stars and met a few
ive been there too, but i bet you had a better view

i can tell its obvious by your walk...cushioned and upward
mine...tired sluggish slumped exhausted trying to reach a place over the hump

up up and away i wish i could fly, thats how i ended up here in the 1st place...nowhere, atleast i was told
dreams are for dreamers so forget about your dreams dreaming gets old

so does looking at grey skies, and gloomy summers
working for a cause yet no fortune 2 weeks of struggle repeatedly, i must be dumber than dumber

the dumbest...place i ever thought i'd be
in the library typing this poem for you to read as if you understand me!

.....................f' my life i hate this place... atleast

Tuesday, September 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
people and their own problems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 September 2014

Love the way you presented lovely

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