Failing Poem by jools England

Failing



I give my best, but still I fail
I run my fastest, but to no avail
There's always somebody who's
stronger, faster, better
I really try, but I'll never get there
I'm not blessed with luck these days
Nothing seems to be going my way
That's why I can't smile like before
As if the joyous part of me walked right out the door
I run my fastest, but still get beat
I land on my head, when I should be on my feet
And I'm sick of trying

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Afzal Shauq 13 October 2009

That's why I can't smile like before As if the joyous part of me walked right out the door I run my fastest, but still get beat I land on my head, when I should be on my feet And I'm sick of trying sweet and reality based poem is this one..liked it..its written professionally and well..well done 10/10

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James Bessant 25 February 2009

lovely poem, captures your thoughts. we all feel like this sometimes

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