Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Fairyland Comments

Rating: 3.5

When I relax in my chair,
With my mind not busy with any care.
I wander away into a fairy land,
Where children play at sea with sand.
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Aditya Chandrasen Salvi
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Shadow Girl 11 May 2011

Nice imagery but i think i prefer your free verse, the rhtyhm is slightly out in some parts but still great effort.

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Aditya Chandrasen Salvi

Aditya Chandrasen Salvi

Ahmednagar, Maharashtra, India
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