Faithful Poem by Dana Amer

Faithful

Rating: 5.0


When he first looked at her
He knew She is the one,
With a sweet smile & a glowing stare
She looked back at him.

Time goes by
But he couldn't say a word,
Not even 'how are you' or a simple 'hi'
that would have meant for her the world.

But one day he decided
To ask her for a date,
He had to take a step forward
Because love won't wait.

The joy filled her heart
& said 'surely yes',
She is glad they are not appart
& no longer him will miss.

As the days passed away
Their love grew more than ever,
He promissed her to stay
By her side forever.

Until one day came
When he died with a heart attack,
She didn't knew who to blame
But she wants her lover back.

Lonely she lived for the rest of her life
& daily she visited his grave to weep,
She would never be someones else`s wife
His love in her heart was so deep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aziz Alkaabi 27 June 2009

There is a good story here, Dana. After twenty years you will revise it and may be laugh at this. You have a beautiful style waitinig to be amilorated and I hate to see you be a hermit.

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Afzal Shauq 26 June 2009

its amazingly written in very professional way..seems to me as you are very perfect poet... and the idea this poem is rich, inspiring, meaningful and poetic flow.. wonderful poem is this one... appreciate you..10 ++++++++++++

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