Fake Poem by patrick o'shaughnessy

Fake

Rating: 5.0


i carry something fake
its working for a while
it can fool any man
its an artificial smile

like make up on a girl
covering whats there
eroding each day
and fading with the air

but if one day it is goe
please do not lose grace
dont stress over me
cause its easy to replace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer K 05 July 2010

this is an incredibly well written, sad poem. really good work. Everyone has a fake smile at some point. I hope yours has gone away, though. for good. All the love

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