n mustafa n mustafa

Rookie - 173 Points (02 03 1989 / patna, india)

Fake Love - Poem by n mustafa n mustafa

IT WAS YOU WHO GAVE ME A REASON TO LIVE.
IT WAS YOU WHO INSPIRED ME TO MOVE AHEAD.
IT WAS YOU WHO TAUGHT ME TO TRUST.
IT WAS YOU WHO MADE MY LIFE WORTHY.

YOU ARE NO MORE WITH ME
YOU HAVE BROKEN YOUR PROMISE.
A PROMISE TO LIVE ALWAYS TOGETHER.
A PROMISE TO DIE TOGETHER.

I WILL NOT LET MYSELF DOWN.
I WILL NOT LET YOU CONTROL ME.
I WILL BE A MAN OF MY WORDS.
I WILL NOT LOVE YOU ANYMORE.

Topic(s) of this poem: faith

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about Fake Love by n mustafa n mustafa

  • Chinedu Dike (11/2/2015 3:00:00 AM)


    Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly - a voyage of bliss. It's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning. It is very important that one learns to take things in stride when love makes its exit. I like the conviction of the piece. A well articulated poem nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Mustafa. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (10/23/2015 3:32:00 AM)


    First two stanzas of the poem paint the protagonist in a sublime shade but the last one belittles his stature- I WILL NOT LOVE YOU ANYMORE. May God give him strength to regain his poise. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2015



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