Falling Apart Poem by anthony hughes

Falling Apart



it was deep inside
the thing that hurt the most
it was like i coudnt live no more
i tryed my best to resolve the problem
but pain just kept on comeing back
as i lost the one i love
my body ached with pain
i didnt know how long i could take it any more
why does it have to be like this
just have to keep seeing it in my dream
it was because u stole my heart
an now its falling apart,

(C) ANTHONY HUGHES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 18 January 2009

Aye... This heart of stone and marble pieces. Cracked apart in so many urban specks... Poor, poor heart, poured away. Etched at until shards been laid... This heart broken clean on through. More of more pain on on through due... Due this pained heart due anew. Great poem! God bless poets all-MJG.

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