As the stars & the moon take o'er from the sun
Love takes its stand
Slowly with the eyes closed, it sparks
Almost impossible to express.
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I can see that English is not your native tongue. Perhaps a proofreader would be a good idea?
The fact that English is not your native tongue and you are able to still write so that your words flow. That is something. some errors in grammar (in case you wanna change them) eludate I think is suppose to be eluate.(meaning dissolve) ellusion I think is suppose to be illusion(mean false or misleading misinterpretation of reality) impossoble is impossible You have great vocabulary in your poerty, use of punctuation is different places might give strong feeling, or capitalizing certain letters, or having lowercase letters.