Falling Rain Poem by Chris G. Vaillancourt

Falling Rain

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The last wind of winter has ceased its power.
It is memory now, and has no message to give.

The rains of spring have replaced the snow.
And spatter insistent tunes upon the roof.

From the ground, the plants have burst out.
Reminders of the cycle of life and renewal.

Early flowers busy in their own serenity.
Splashes of colour that arrive in splendour.

Oh falling rain, cleanse the dirt of the heart.

I find myself sitting on my back porch.
Surrounded by the discrimination of life.

Sighing gently to the pattern of the rain,
singing softly the songs of emerging spring.

Patterns of raindrops that hit the mind in
mud puddles of dank self imposed denial.

They are a growing source of cleansing
which shall shatter, for now, the winter grey.

O falling rain, cleanse the dirt of the heart.

Standing up, I become once again myself.
Moaning in unison with the rain, captivated

by the thoughts of what the waters bring.
I am entirely open to fountains of rebirth.

Vindictive tugging of thought interferes
with the cherished sunshine of awareness.

Rushing from my porch into the rain,
I pull each flower from the ground.

O falling rain, cleanse the dirt of the heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2009

Oh falling rain, cleanse the dirt of the heart........it is rightly said sir..it not only washes dirt on the surface but from heart within..... with new message we endevour to see new things to emerge....lovely poem.....10 read mine... rain delay.. rain has come... o, mercy rain god....wathched helplessly..

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Adeline Foster 22 March 2014

The format of this poem was well done and exactly matched your intent. For another take on the subject read mine - Rain - Adeline

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A great free flowing and poem with vivid imagery and a plea for rain to bring a cleansing from within....10

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Raj Nandy 15 October 2009

You have indeed put it beautifully in your concluding lines! Let the rain cleanse our heart of all malice and hatred and fill it with love! 10! - Raj

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Susan Horvath 14 October 2009

Intense and rich as always

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Mike Levesque 14 October 2009

An impressive, mind-boggling well done write

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