Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Falling Shadows Comments

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How can a feeling so sweet be deceitful, and be thought wrong?
Could she be too broken that with her I can’t belong?
Am I just blind a man, with too big a desire for sight, that I blinding myself from within my means?
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Alan Kabanshi
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Allemagne Roßmann 21 August 2011

Just then am awaked by empty feelings awaiting her belonging And fear grips my heart lest reality presents her before another man Hooked in my thoughts, she is what I can’t seem to forget Her words unspoken, yell for my touch The rhythm of your poem is here.I like it straightaway.Wonderful verses.

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