Friday, June 20, 2008

Family Ties Revised Comments

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A redundant story of a broken home
Another typical poem
Mom turned to bitter insanity
Dad was distant everyday of the week
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Bob Gibson 20 June 2008

A sad tale Dan, but some beautiful lines A meal she seasoned with hate and marinated in anger She had nothing to tone down the pain that was in her So that is what she served to all her guests Pain loneliness anger simmered a stew of revenge regards Bob

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Dan Ochs

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