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trenton, you should qualify for a poem compition..ure poems are good enough to qualify and i would know...im a qualifyer pls ure an emo lyk me and emos always havea good chance...or addd me if u have facebook

i like it the guy seems very uh.. not easily emotinally efected by tragic events lol and it's not very specific so it kinda leaves you with a mystery LOVE IT

Honestly, I liked the poem, but the last line made it seem... I don't know... a little too creepy.

The poems go thru on here so fast, and I nearly missed this one. I love the way it is written, and the subtle twist at the end which changes the whole status of the poem from sympathy to hate. Clever Write Steve