Friday, July 1, 2005

Far Away From Home Comments

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(Living in a distant land away far away from the near and dear ones, this creation of mine is just a small wish from GOD)

Thou, make a bird with two tiny wings
Freedom I can wear with a melody sing
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Zafia Izhar
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 April 2008

i feel like home....when i read your works............

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Amin H 12 August 2005

a very sweet ending line, I totally enjoy the droplet image.

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David Harkins 10 August 2005

Beautiful words. A beautiful, sweet & gentle poem that tells of loved ones far away. Keep up the good work.

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