Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Far From Day Comments

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The azure space of sky soon fades away
I slowly lock my eyes, dulled by dismay
Now wishing for a land that's far from day
Dreamy songs and sounds may guide my way
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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2016

Beautiful narrative piece of poetry depicting sweet peaceful night dream, well articulated and elegantly penned in lovely rhyme scheme from heart with connvicction. An insightful poem in good diction. Thanks for sharing Berkeley. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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