Polby Saves

Rookie (4/6/75 / Fifth Circle of Hell (sullenness))

Far Too Rested - Poem by Polby Saves

I want to forget
Not have to worry about
What was just forgotten
From a mere 10 seconds ago

The time involved is an
Excruciatingly long prospect
Minutes being not finite
Measurements any longer

I'll refuse to leave this place
This room, much less
For at least two days
Nothing but hydration and cigarettes

Wonder aloud about anomie
If I'm afflicted
A ridiculous thought
Of course I am

Comments about Far Too Rested by Polby Saves

  • (5/14/2011 12:55:00 AM)

    Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style.
    Great write indeed.
    I rate it 10.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A daring hope' on page 1.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011

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