Fate Poem by Mysterious Pesudonym Nisha Jalan

Fate

Rating: 5.0


Why is it that I am deemed upon
a sorrowful technology fate?
A lost laptop, unsaved work can be added on
My list of unfortunate events, those now dilate.

This pile of work grows bigger
As all the work I do backfires
All I hear is them clash, clink and clatter
Trying their best to be shine out like sapphires

Its technology that is the root
Of all the world’s problems -
Global warming, breaching and some even loot.
Without it, the world was less on their bottoms!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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