Sunday, May 1, 2016
Fault In My Stars Comments
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A rift in my mind, maybe fault in my stars,
Two parallel thoughts, like racing cars,
Should i hold back or just try hard,
No signs on this road, near or far.
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NAMAN SEHGAL
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Edward Kofi Louis
01 May 2016
Two parallel thoughts! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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3/13/2026 2:17:44 PM # 1.0.0
This is not a very extraordinary situation to come across. It has been portrayed quite nicely but the poem thankfully ends on an optimistic note. Thanks, Naman. A rift in my mind, maybe fault in my stars, Each time I heal, there's another scar, One blow after another, straight to the heart.
Thank you so much for the feedback Ranjish. I'm too positive a person to not have an optimistic ending. :) Would really appreciate if you could review my other works as well.