Thursday, June 4, 2009

Fear Comments

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A fear residez ma very soul,
It sayz m nt going to get,
Ma greatest vsh.
I refuse dz cruel fact,
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Sumaiya Gul
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Marieta Maglas 28 December 2009

May be yew r denying da fact grl denial may be a temporary solution nice reflective poem

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Afzal Shauq 07 June 2009

well done dear for sweet poem... idea is good, expression is impressive and intersting but whats laking is spellings... if you concentrate on this side.you will be very perfect... hope you see and confirm perfect words taking help from dictionary.. you have much ability...basically i am peace wisher poet with 6 books published... best of luck...hope like my poems too

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Joseph Poewhit 04 June 2009

Them feelings can be ominous - pray time

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