Thursday, March 2, 2006

Fear Comments

Rating: 3.8

Shadows moving through the darkness
Black is the night for added stress
An eerie glow from the forest beyond
A silky mist rising from a nearby pond
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Sharon Ashworth
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Chris Mendros 08 January 2007

comes off as predictable at first, but ends up pretty strong. Doing it all in couplets is no mean feat, either.

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Samah Mcgona 25 April 2006

This poem has suspense and it makes me think. a lovely poem!

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Sharon Ashworth

Sharon Ashworth

El Reno, Oklahoma
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