My heart beat,
Resonates
A long distance away,
Distinct and clear,
...
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Your poem evokes much emotion & longing. It had a great flow to it. one error 'dew dropp tears'- should be ' dew dropp tears' Thanks for sharing. Ravensong
I think this is one of your best so far. All the very best and waiting for more to come along. Enjoy your work a lot.