Sunday, September 20, 2009

Feelings Comments

Rating: 4.5

My heart beat,
Resonates
A long distance away,
Distinct and clear,
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hari kunisseri
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Jayanthi Prakash 22 September 2009

I think this is one of your best so far. All the very best and waiting for more to come along. Enjoy your work a lot.

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Jean Dament 20 September 2009

Your poem evokes much emotion & longing. It had a great flow to it. one error 'dew dropp tears'- should be ' dew dropp tears' Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

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