Friday, February 17, 2017

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I Am
I am the quiet eager wave hidden in the sea,
I am the hidden treasure among the glimmering gold,
I am the happiness to the souls of the people,
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Deep Sangani
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2017

Happiness, eager soul. valiant soul, perturbed soul, Eccentric, hopeful, creative, jocular, nervous and humorous. But I am eager to know what happens next, In these picturesque chapters of life. This final verse is so fine. I read your poem very well. Thank you very much. tony

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Chinedu Dike 17 February 2017

Beautiful philosophical piece of poetry insightfully brought forth with conviction. Good rendition of words. Thanks for sharing Deep.

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Deep Sangani 18 February 2017

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it :)

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