Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Fight It Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

When things go wrong as they most often will,
When the road you're trudging seems all up hill,
When the funds are low and the debts are high,
And you want to smile, but have to sigh,
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Vijay Jacob
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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