Tuesday, March 13, 2012

Final Breath Comments

Rating: 4.5

One dark night in a hospital room,
The grim reaper paid a visit to see Steve Butler.
He could see the many family members surrounding,
And the struggle for Steve to hold on.
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Cody Klinker
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Chinedu Dike 17 May 2015

A beautiful imaginary piece of poetry depicting the final moments before eternal slumber. A lovely and well articulated poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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