Monday, May 26, 2008

Fire Emblem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flames flicker, fire burns.
Grass sways in the breeze.
Water flows, mountains stand tall.
Suns set, moons rise,
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Soren Lyon
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William Jackson 26 May 2008

I suppose we are to some extent swept along although I like the fact that I can invent my reality to a great extent as well, and I like the fact that nothing is static. Everything is subject to change, and this can be a very good thing. If you do not like the way something is, change it. Do not accept anything as permanent. Nothing is static. Set the world on its head. Try something new. Anyway, I liked your poem. It really got me thinking as you can tell.

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