Phil Whittaker

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Fire Of Love. - Poem by Phil Whittaker

I would give you the universe and all its swirls of mystery,
capture up the planets and all that vast majestic beauty,
but they are nothing i can afford, being a poor man, me,
instead all i can give is my battered and bloody heart of love,
i hope that all i can give is enough,
to satisfy the fire in your eyes, the furnace in your heart,
becuase without your burning flame so bright,
I will be alone, in the cold dark night.

Comments about Fire Of Love. by Phil Whittaker

  • (6/21/2006 12:39:00 PM)

    lovely phil...this is really good...keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • (6/15/2006 10:37:00 AM)

    Hey, i think the last line should be 'I would be....' not 'will', seeing as it would only happen if she did leave u.................anyway, this is an amazing poem otherwise :) (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2006 12:46:00 PM)

    Awesome and deep stuff, Phil. What a lucky girl- you wouldn't need to get her all the stars and planets she'd have you! Keep up the good work- I'm luvvin it!
    Luv ya, :) xXxXx

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, May 29, 2006

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