Crimson Love Poem by Phil Whittaker

Crimson Love

Rating: 4.7


And should i not wake do not greave,
For the crimson red upon my sleave
Is there not because of some mistake,
The tear in my armour is not as bad,
as the slit in my wishful thoughts,

I woke in heaven
Heaven is not you,
I wish, I wish, Oh how I wish,
I had bled tears instead of that crimson love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 21 June 2006

the last line is beautiful...lovely...nalini

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Dana Tyrrell 10 April 2006

i like this alot, (thanks btw. for your comment! ! !) it reminds me of My Chemical Romance lyrics...very haunting, but i like it all the same :)

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