Saturday, March 28, 2009

Firefly Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was searching for the moon one night
I was searching for some light
But then there was nothing bright
There was no moon or star in sight
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Arvie Calimlim
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Wonderful composition, love it,10++

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Danzen D. 31 March 2009

*smile* dim...still..quiet laughters and amusements...the firefly..peaceful and bright in the cloak of the night...it never vanished at dawn...it was what completed a new kind of light...a glint in the eyes...a glow in the heart. Nice poem. Smile!

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