Monday, April 23, 2018

First Date. Comments

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In my fantasies and dreams, you are always lying in my chest.
I've never took a girl out, you are my first.
Forgive me if doesn't go well but I'll try my best
I would like it if you be mine and love it if you move to my nest.
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Tsireledzo Masindi
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Vincent Kamogelo 23 April 2018

i love the poem very much but i'm not sure if this poem is a sonnet

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Masindi T.B 25 April 2018

thanks for that comment I will be sure to change that error and be more careful next time

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Tsireledzo Masindi

Tsireledzo Masindi

Hanani village. tshimbupfe
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