First Date. Poem by Tsireledzo Masindi

First Date.

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In my fantasies and dreams, you are always lying in my chest.
I've never took a girl out, you are my first.
Forgive me if doesn't go well but I'll try my best
I would like it if you be mine and love it if you move to my nest.

I know what am saying is too much to be said in the first date
I just felt that if I waited another day, it will be too late.
On the first date and already I think you're my soul mate.
"Oww" your beauty can clean a rebels' heart and take out hate.

I fell for you when I saw you the first day.
I don't want to lose you so I'll be careful what to say.
You looked loving, caring and gentle so please keep it that way.
Feel free to order food matching your beauty and I will pay.

First Date.
Monday, April 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the young mn in this poem just met a girl that he likes and he is out on a date with her but its his first date with her and also his first date with a girl to be precise and he doesnt know what to do and what not to do.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent Kamogelo 23 April 2018

i love the poem very much but i'm not sure if this poem is a sonnet

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Masindi T.B 25 April 2018

thanks for that comment I will be sure to change that error and be more careful next time

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Tsireledzo Masindi

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Hanani village. tshimbupfe
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