Sunday, January 6, 2008
First Date. Comments
Rating: ★5.0
across this table
quivering light-streaked lines, some straight, some long, all crooked and dazzling against the man-made lake beside us
course through our conversation.
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Gary Witt
14 January 2008
Ms. Englund: Very nicely done. You've picked out some really fine and poignant details and added a wonderful little metaphor in the incubator. I enjoyed this one a great deal. Thank you for sharing it. -G
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3/2/2026 1:26:55 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful write Julia....Got to say it you are my favourite poet on this site.So fresh and stylish..You stamp your talent on everything you write.You have an identity that clearly shows your independent mind. Sid John xx