Tuesday, May 12, 2009

First Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

his fingertips slid along my back
applying hardly any pressure
yet sending shock waves over my flesh,
slowly, slowly, his hands moved
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Kelly Rose
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 23 August 2009

Romantically mellifluous way to perfectly describe a first kiss.

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Surya . 14 May 2009

i felt like a living commentary.so expressive.nice poem.posted 10 surya

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nic e descriptive piece with a fantastic ending.

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Brandon w 12 May 2009

shows a lot of emotion.and good detail.

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Kelly Rose

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