First Love Poem by Jaco Louw

First Love



I saw my first love while she took a bath.
She lived in a house that had one big mouse.
Yes, she was poor and my heart became sore.
I gave her some money and the weather bacame sunny.
My name is Corry and this is the end of my story.

Wednesday, December 26, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: house,money,weather
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it realy did happen and it inspired me.
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