First Love (1st Poem Please Rate) Poem by shawn O'connor

First Love (1st Poem Please Rate)

Rating: 5.0


I’m sorry for the pain I’ve done,
I wish I was your only one

The Rain falls as your tears,
For me to sorrow throughout the years

I try my best to make u smile,
Only to mess it up in a little while

Talking with you is the best thing ever,
When will it end hopefully never

I put u into all my love,
To see you glimmer and rise above,

I run faster to reach your heart,
But my bitter sweetness turns it tart

My love for you lasts forever,
Till the day we are back together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irene Mae Velasco 30 March 2010

wow! what a nice poem? keep up the good work...! ! ! and more powers.......

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Nikkie C 29 January 2009

This is a great poem

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Surya . 16 December 2008

Hi really good. I have voted 10 for you. Congrats Love & Regards surya surya

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Surya . 16 December 2008

Hi really good. I have voted 10 for you. Congrats Love & Regards surya surya

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Great job... Nice love poem.. It is very deep and strong Krista

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