Wednesday, September 2, 2009

First Moment Comments

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When I first saw you
I knew then
You were the one
I wanted to be with
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Ruben Gaytan
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Sana Rose 03 September 2009

Boy...u r such a boy! ! Poetry are feelings put down as such...raw and warm...

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Jan Fuentez 03 September 2009

simply beautiful... great piece... continue writing. keep it up.

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Claudia Krizay 02 September 2009

' I feel like superman'- great line-

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Ruben Gaytan

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