Tuesday, June 14, 2011

First To The Finish Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last to the kill,
First to the finish.
Fighting until
The thoughts diminish.
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Brandon McConnell
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Brandon Mcconnell 14 June 2011

Thanks, I appreciate it. If you have any suggestions, I'm open to them.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 14 June 2011

Another great poem, I'm not sure who really are but you most certainly got talent. Its got this up and then rhythm too it and I like it! ! !

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