Flamboyant Love Yarn Poem by Maahi Priyanka Raj

Flamboyant Love Yarn

Rating: 5.0


O' Venus the God of love and beauty
Why did you cast magical powers of love?
After thousands of meteors striking tonight
Finally, my heart weeping for my untold love
Story which is not yet told, story which never started
Walking through the corner with my broken love
Without you, there lies no Paradise of morning rising
Fading fast the beauty of world
Colourful day turning into sleepless night

And I stood at pavement...watching motion of town
Across the shore searching for hope of ship
And let my heart flow along with waves
Castle of Emotions searching for home
Oh! Where shall I travel with my heartless soul
Desire of heart, larger than life is fighting with destiny
Friends of sorrows journeying around destination
Why don't you never understand my untold love

Oh! Venus why did you cast beauty of love
Oh! Have been turned to lover sage
Singing ballads of my untold love story
Eyes keep waiting for his return
Lost in my own fragrance of Romance
Promise of life and death unscripted
Reminds me of false fairy tales
If you are listening fairy god mother
Why did you let my heart cry all alone?
And never knew I would wander with an affected love-story



Priyanka Raj


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Sunday, April 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 April 2019

Singing ballads of my untold love story Eyes keep waiting for his return Lost in my own fragrance of Romance Promise of life and death unscripted Reminds me of false fairy tales..............Love is a mystery. it was, it is and it will ever be........ your crying, tears, sense of loss and the great desire to be with your great love in paradise like sensations of dearest and beautiful moments... all sounds to be mysterious. That is the beauty of your poetry. tony

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Mahi Priyanka Raj 21 April 2019

Dear Poet You are such a magnificent reviewer. Sometimes I am not able to weave words to thank you for your best review on my poems. I am sure you will lead many young poets. my poems gets honored through your thoughts and love you share for my writings, capturing the right essence and absolute themes. That's the beauty of Dr. Antony Theodre.... best regards Priyanka Raj

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