Saturday, August 2, 2008

Flooding Comments

Rating: 3.0

Joyful and so beautiful
at first until a signal calls
and we are departed
i am left here
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Devon Maxwell
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

I'd like to recomend this poem, but I can't because it goes from here to there. There is no connection for the reader to hold onto. From one state of being to another. GW62

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