Edgar Val

Flutuando

Neste momento tão tristonho
oiço gaivotas no meu ouvido
oiço-as com seu ar risonho
com o meu coraçao partido.
Vejo-as voar, que inveja eu tenho
eu aqui, sem sair do sitio, me mantenho.
Como era bom poder voar
sem nada em que pensar
apenas flutuar e flutuar
no vazio deste grande mar
que é o de quem só sabe amar...

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 13, 2007
Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011

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  • Gaivota Gaivota (6/10/2012 4:21:00 PM)

    It's a nice poem. Simple, clear but deep.

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  • Kirstiie Chapmann (3/17/2010 7:08:00 AM)

    Amor belo ele.. envolve inveja

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  • Lucianne Fasolo (10/13/2007 5:34:00 PM)

    Muito bonito. Adorei mesmo, :) Você escreve muito bem.

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