Fly On The Wall Comments

At last the fiction comes to reality. 'I wish I was a fly' transforms into 'I’m jealous of that fly'. Actually the reality inspires the poet in the journey towards a fiction. This form of expression makes the poem acceptable from the logical point of making poem. Good writing. A vision of the fly have been highlighted through the poem where poet is the secondary one. And ultimately the vision dominates all other passion and likingness. Write more. 10/10 Regards, pranab