Monday, September 29, 2008

For Each Mile They Step Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hope torn-
their hollow eyes speak,
as a single tear is wiped,
with aching fingers.
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Emily Lovell
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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 October 2008

Good use of metaphors and adjectives, right tone.....9

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