Tuesday, April 9, 2013

' For The First Time In My Life' Comments

Rating: 3.5

Look around us, look deep in my eyes,
you will see your name, my face
and my soul from the past of a broken mirror.
I said, I will never look back so, i follow the path
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sandra vallejo garcia
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Sunshine Garcia 25 April 2013

thankyou for your feedback

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Gajanan Mishra 09 April 2013

silence becomes music. good write. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Little King Of Sorrows 09 April 2013

Beautiful write. Intriguing and well composed. Cant wait to see where that may lead u to.10

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